at first, I was confused. but moving on it turned out quite nice; the lighthearted banters is a nice one. and the world building is very unique - dormant mysterious energy discovered in humans.
there's room for improvement in the sentences structure, but it's potential is lofty
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I love how detailed your writing is from the prologue to chapter 4. you started a bit slow but later I got the hang of it. it's so interesting.
I love the interactions between the characters, just from your writing I got to know the kind of dynamics the friends have. it's amazing 😍.
there's room for improvement in the sentences structure, but it's potential is lofty
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