It's entertaining enough to keep my attention. That's all the matters to me. I like these types, where the MC has to accept disciples. There isn't enough to really criticize, the grammar and spelling is fine. Maybe someone could argue you should've expanded on when and how the actual MC took over the body of his predecessor? It just jumped straight into the action, but I actually prefer this over some long info dump at the beginning. Anyways, I look forward to the more.
This is a good book but he's my friend so it's trash.............fudhjficbsbekxjdbwjodxkebrjcifbwbckcndbckfnejckfnebkckmsmalxosjqbdhxhfbridhxbwbscofjtbdixjdnfn
Absolutely amazing, I love the synopsis of the book. I also love the characters. Looking forward to reading more In the future.........................
Aight, I said that a month ago... I’ve been looking into writing more. I’m now legitimately going to write. I will put more effort in. I apologize for not being truthful to myself. This is going out to all of my books. If you like the book, vote 1 time. If I can get more than 3 votes (low standard) I will start that book once more. Till then - CreedOfUnity
Fists balled and teeth clenched, Havel could only admit that the extreme pressure he was being subjected to…was a bit much. Havel's entire body trembled, his veins bulged, and his skin was turning rosy. He knew he could take a few steps with no problem, but anymore than that and he might collapse again.
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