The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
Haven't gotten that far but the author is making edits which shows they are dedicated to the story building and the time behind it. I hope it lives up to my expectations lol
The first chapter was a load of info! Haha, 😂 I like the story and the premise of the novel. I can only suggest chopping the Infos maybe in between the story. I don't know how but maybe it was okay. To just slowly inject the info into the story and not making it an info dump. Maybe another suggestion was to chop the paragraphs into sentences with enter ↩️ in-between. To make it more easier to read. But still five stars in the quality of writing and story of course. Engaging plot and lovable characters. Kudos and good luck in the future! Peace ✌️
The abductor who is dressed in white coat chose not to fight Dylan in fear of Alerting the strong forces within the Ship. While taking large strides the man moved faster and faster, his steps were nimble but quiet. He moved unnoticed even after passing by some patrols whose backs are facing him.
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