Somewhat disliked the second harem member, because because she had played with other men besides her husband before meeting the MC, a bit stupid in my opinion the MC put her in the Harem System with women who easily cheated
The story starts promising but with an extremely bad pace, 80 ch. for only two days and then a week in 10 ch. making an inconsistency in pacing. Also the mc in the zanza development arc is contrary to the first arc, just wanting to change everything to modern standards forgetting he is in older times and as he already explained first he has to adapt, but this doesn't happen. Also the interest for him creating a competitive market of modern times is ridiculous, considering he has a monopoly of goods that are groundbreaking, thus he don't need that competitive prices.In general the story is good with interesting concepts such as the army scheme and world building but the mc cannot manage to get a defined personality: does he want to conquer, develop economy, protect himself or let debauchery consume him, is he a good person, is he bad, neutral. It isn't clear what he wants or what he is so the mc becomes a character with inconsistencies that damage the plot and development of secondary characters.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Over rated. Too slow of a phase with the story, too OP (ch 15 already had godly skills), low IQ MC (doesn't use his hack every time), incomplete description of levels and whatnot...
Very very nice story. It's a little bit dramatic but entertaining. I wish there are more fighting episodes. Aiden should also learn martial arts so he can defend himself. It would be nice if the boy lead character is stronger. Thank you.
it's start kinda good but the quality start decreasing up to 60 chapters and there's also an flashback no jutsu is that really needed? because i kinda become lost when flashback's happening and it is kinda manipulative when his gonna cure sophia mother and her when situation become unbearable don't mind my annoying opinion and continue your work goodluck
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