Although I’m not a big fan of apocalypse novels, I do like zombies and undead stuff especially necromancy eh I’m getting off topic anyway I recommend this novel I tried it as a heck but I actually liked it so do try and give it a shot.I’m an author myself and I know that shadow strives for improvement so if u can do help him, he will always ask for it I know that for sure.
Thanks for the chapter But make bunny his wife in his harem, I think it is best . And you can add more harem but make the journey more adventurous for him
Okay I just read to chapter six and in all honesty I’m not gonna read any further untill some editing has been done since it has been devolved into the level of a machine translated story I feel like if the author can fix the mistakes the story would be quite good but honestly the grammatical errors and the fact that the way it’s written is similar to how a child who has just started speaking talks is ruining this for me There are words missing incorrect tense used spelling mistakes while not many from what I could tell are still there I really want to like this story but untill it has been edited HEAVILY I might add I will not be returning I don’t mind that it’s bl and transmigration type stories are one of my favourites I sincerely hope the author will take an editor into consideration since he has decided to write a novel in English
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"Were is you bravado now brother" Leonidas looks at the beaten Alexander who is now lying on the floor all bruised and battered with blood flowing everywhere, the rage and humiliation that he feels right now for being treated like a rag doll by this brother who he so looked down on[Do you want power] all of a sudden Alexander hears a voice in his head [ I can give you power]. Everyone starts to hear Alexander s heart beating and its getting louder and louder, Leonidas senses something wrong as his ripple energy is warning him of an ominous presence, *BADUM BADUM* Alexander's heartbeat keeps getting louder and his Axe begins to glow *ROAAAARRRR* A deafening roar is heard, Leonidas quickly retrieves his spear and looks at his now standing brother who is roaring like a mad lion and comes charging towards him [Good let us show them the true power of this axe] that is the last thing Alexander hears before his entire vision turns red. He then swings his axe at Leonidas, Leonidas dodges him and side steps out of his way takes him off his feet and as Alexander lands on the floor a massive thud can be heard. (You never fight with anger, that's the first thing we were tought when we were kids).
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