The narrative is engaging, and the drop system adds an intriguing element. The story flows coherently throughout, with only a few minor inconsistencies where certain details were introduced but never revisited or given a name. These omissions aren't detrimental to the plot, but they could have added depth if addressed. The ending comes as a surprise, though it might not align perfectly with the protagonist's character. On a personal note, I feel the resolution doesn't quite capture their essence, but at least it provides closure.
If I were to critique, one point would be that there's a lack of clarity regarding Xiao Shi's drop system. Was it bestowed upon him by a higher power, or did it occur purely by chance? Regardless, I believe a clearer explanation would have been appreciated.
"Two stars deducted equals a poor portrayal of characters - they are unappealing, dull, or uninteresting. The plot, unfortunately, lacks excitement as well. Although there are minor flaws, I'll refrain from detailing them for the sake of focusing on the bigger picture. A three-star rating indicates that the novel has an intriguing theme, maintains coherence throughout, and its length (which I appreciate in a book) is a plus."
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If I were to critique, one point would be that there's a lack of clarity regarding Xiao Shi's drop system. Was it bestowed upon him by a higher power, or did it occur purely by chance? Regardless, I believe a clearer explanation would have been appreciated.