Hello, a little review from this very average Author.
My work has now reached 100 chapters, a long and tiring milestone, but it is always worth it when I see my readers happy and continuing to read my work.
In this second volume, the development of the conflict expands to the six major houses involved, especially in the rising problems in the west of Athalaris. The estimated number of chapters in this second volume is 80-95, so please bear with me.
If you want to express your will, feel free to do so through this review. I will give it a listen.
Revenge is my go to genre, especially when... The main character scores some serious backup and magic way beyond what they bagged in their past life. I mean, who hasn't daydreamed about that in the same boat? At least we can let it all out through fictional characters, right?
Do you like the idea of Game Of Thrones mixed with isekai? If you do, then this book's for you (it sure is for me). Plotting, scheming backstabbing, factions, bit of magic and pretty good writing solid novel.
It's a good book. The only part that left something to be desired was the MC's personality, but we can't forget that the book has just begun. I mention this point because in the first life the MC didn't retaliate knowing his brother was trying to kill him? Let's be realistic: who will allow themselves to be killed just because the killer is family? I felt that this part left something to be desired. Another point is the MC's lack of ambition in his second life, his only objective is to avenge his mother. This was frustrating, I expected a conqueror after reading the synopsis. Also, the MC is smart at times but extremely naive at other times, so I hope the character develops. Don't get me wrong, this is constructive criticism, the novel is amazing, don't be discouraged, it only has this small flaw. It's a hidden gem.
the urban ambience is quite strong in the beginning. then snap, it changes into the fantasy realm, beyond imagination.
the narration is very good, rich, and the dialogue flows smoothly.
break a leg for the wsa participation. good luck for you, author.
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My work has now reached 100 chapters, a long and tiring milestone, but it is always worth it when I see my readers happy and continuing to read my work.
In this second volume, the development of the conflict expands to the six major houses involved, especially in the rising problems in the west of Athalaris. The estimated number of chapters in this second volume is 80-95, so please bear with me.
If you want to express your will, feel free to do so through this review. I will give it a listen.
Thank you.
Long live King Arryn!
the narration is very good, rich, and the dialogue flows smoothly.
break a leg for the wsa participation. good luck for you, author.