This book has a really interesting plot. Although the pacing of the story is quite slow, it would leave you hooked to know what's going to happen next. The world building also has a slow pace, but it will not mess up the overall quality of the novel.
So far, pretty amazing! I love the premise of a first person book and how the main character doesn't talent, but we all know that the main character does have talent (we just don't know when it will appear.)I don't know mucj but about the world background but the character design is pretty 'un mature, kid-like, naive." I don't know. Maybe the main character will grow.
The premise was great, but then author decided to make the MC a villain who commit nedless cruel actions and make bad choices for the sake of looking evil. For example he choose an evil cultivator he had just seen as his subordinate to manage a city, when he could have saved the city lord, who looked like a trustworthy person and had more experience with managing people. Another thing I disliked is the total massacre. Read some others dungeon novels, it makes no sense for the death rate to be that high. Who would want to enter a dungeon where armies get decimated? Humans are greedy, but not that stupid. And sometimes the same rules you made for the tower don't works for the sake of plot. For example when the experience didn't get absorbed immediately by the city lord or when the evil cultivator absorbed the experience from the monsters someone else killed; among these monster there was also one with one layer lower, but you previously said that one could absorb experience only from monster with the same or higher cultivation. There are many other little things i disliked and i truly think it is a pity that this story took such a turn.
'Bull shit! you are only want to accompany my Zero-sama and don't want him to alone with 'her' hump..' while thinking something very rude the teacher said with a not happy smiley face"Okey, all of you can go! I will talk to your next teacher about it, so she will not punish you."
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