I Became Popular After Acting Like a Green Tea

Echidna : "Yes… Eden is the Earth Devil. The one who formed a contract with Emerada Lugnica thousand years ago. The Earth Devil gave the young girl, the first one of Royal Blood, access to the [Truth of This World] and Witch Genes. She, along with Satella, were the only ones with All Witch Genes. However, just like Satella, Emerada was incompatible with the Witch Genes, and lost control. Thus, she died, and all Witch Genes scattered all over the world… Thus, generations and generations of the Witches of Sins were bornーー"

Sorry fellers been gone for a while. I was busy with assignments, went on a few dates lol, and just recently I injured myself lifting weights. I've got a lot of physical therapy to do and more assignments to turn in but like I said summertime is coming and I plan to hopefully finish this story after summer. For those that like my story and care and are still here,  I'm sorry. Obviously since I'm writing this, I haven't abandoned this story and I never will. Until the next one, I'm out. YERRR!

"Alright fine give it to me."

thanks for the chapter

" Oh , Hello there Honey !" Mom answered.

Stiles: Hey Lydia hurry up we have to drop the kids at Scott's before heading out.

Omg i can barlery breath while reading this

Sighing tiredly, Clint said, "Look, I'm not really qualified to answer that kinda thing. I'm the bow and arrow guy, not the answer questions guy. That's the Captain's wheelhouse. Now, come on, I'll lead you guys up to the top floor and make sure-"

Writing quality one star: Seems like after the first couple chapters the translation turns absolutely abysmal. Every line is separated and the grammar is horrible. Worse than standard mtl.Story Development 5 stars: The story is unique and neat. Everyone develops a small world than battles with them to develop them. The premise is exciting.Character Design 4 star: Real people don't really matter and the focus is less on physical qualities and more on mental competence. The beast designs are nice though.Updates 5 star: Translation is bad enough that they can probably get a hundred chapters out a day.World Background 2 star: I read over 60 chapters and the mc's civilation is never really explained. How powerful are they? What's up with Qi and all that? How hood is technology?Fix the translation and story instantly turns to a 4.2 Star

So far there's only two chapters but it's been a good read with barely any grammatical errors. Would come back to make more reviews based on the quality of the book once there's more chapters. Good job, Author! keep the chapters coming.

Seems a bit unfair that I'm allowed to rate my own work, but goodreads allows it so it should be okay. Anyway, this story is awesome! From prose to world building to character development, it's all really good!(Totally not biased btw)Read it now!

damn bro you are writing a novel now? gotta check It out, be prepared to recieve a ton of constructive criticism lol🤣