I Became a Scum in Depressing Game

Honestly I don't know how to describe this feeling that I am getting while reading this book but If I have to put my finger on it then it would be UNCOMFORTABLE I mean a lot uncomfortable 😖
At first it was progressing well and nice when there was only one MC but then came our OG and that's where I started feeling weird, How MC teaches OG to make his own harem and how he even helps him. And then when Ayumi (a sub heroine) came in the picture and that's where my patience wore thin. I mean just look at how our MC (he himself) helped her (sub heroine) realise her fetish (being cuck queen) with OG. In my opinion it would have been best ( at least better than now) if you have let OG's story progress WITHOUT MC interference at all if you really were trying to create two MC's kinda story tho it would have been perfect if there was only one MC.
There are a lot other things I would like to say but I will stop here as it will discourage other readers
To Author: A question for you, suppose you were a READER of this story (not Author), how do you think you would feel when you liked our MC (story wise) and Ayumi (literally) both, and suddenly there is a third person (OG) who f*** Ayumi huh?....I don't think it would be anything less for what I am feeling currently i.e., only if  you don't have any weird fetish LOL
Sorry But I don't think I can stay in this journey with you any longer tho keep up the good work.

came back and am very glad i did author great work and all i can give as of now is powerstones startin tmrw i gave dem away already

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hey author I have a request please can you not make Mc pervert it has great storyline please don't destroy it by give Mc disgusting fetishist

Feels mid and doesn't do anything groundbreaking. If you've read some then you read it all.

Unexpectedly Good
The title does not do justice to the story