It has a decent start that’s going somewhere.Only problemS are within the grammar. Some sentences had minor problems.The big problem however is that the Author mixes up his past and present tense. This honestly puts me off as someone who grew up with English and it might affect my writing if i get into so imma stop reading.My advice is to get software like grammarly or just get an editor but this is the author’s story so he can do whatever he wants.Maybe in the future, I’ll come back to this.
I think it's very tragic what happened to Ken's parents. I really loved the synopsis and the story It's self is amazing. Continue your wonderful work Author.
Hello fellow book lovers, I decided since webnovel wasn't going to update this novel I would. This is not a translation and I take no credit for this story, but I've read it in its entirety so I thought I would share it with all of you. I am mostly just fixing the pronouns and the names that are incorrect in a mtl site so if i mess up with any of the spelling, feel free to let me know and I will fix it. I know right now it's nothing new and webnovel has already translated 60 chapters but please bear with me until I can move them here. I will start chapter 61-80 today hopefully but life may get in my way. I will be posting atleast 20 chapters a day though so don't worry about cliffhangers. This was a long note but I hope you all enjoy the journey in the novel with me.
Raw name 人在书中，正在妹妹指点下当魔头 (credits to milkshakez for finding the book).Raw book source: wap()faloo()com/1086020()htmlreplace () with .Translated title: Man in book, receiving his sister's guidance to be the devil.MTL summary: When Ouyang Feng woke up, he actually transmigrated into a fantasy novel written by his sister. What was even more troublesome was that his sister also wrote him as a stepping stone for the protagonist.Not only did the childhood sweetheart give birth to a child for the protagonist, but he also fell into a demon and was smashed into pieces by the protagonist.Ouyang Feng spit out a mouthful of old blood, the plot of this day is too poisonous!Fortunately, on his birthday, the notebook that his sister gave him also traveled with him, allowing him to communicate with his sister.then……"Yes, go to the back mountain to find a big tree that was struck by lightning, then turn left three times, and you can enter a secret realm where there are god-level exercises.""What, pills? Go to the east market and find an old man surnamed Xu. There is a ring on his street stall. There are countless pills in the ring, enough for you to eat like jelly beans."At last."Also, don't forget to find the Moonlight Treasure Box. This is an artifact that can travel through space. I will also come to that world for a vacation."In this regard, Ouyang Feng had only one thought, "Where is the heroine?"My thoughts: dishonest translator, posting an original as a translated work. Maybe it isn't his work but copied from another copyrighted book.
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Hurm, how to say this without offending the army of anti-bad reviewer?... First, the synopsis kind of wrong? He said he found it, but from my humble opinion, he make it appear.. And then, the ChuGe guy has a weird sense of value to equipment... Everything seems like a trash for him. And don't forget that he has the weird personalities. Maybe because he learn it from the bad guy? He get a pet dog, four to be exact and use it for aggro... I know it's fiction, but this kind of tick me off...
The concept is a unique one and from the title my guess is that MC will be a puppeteer/necromancer? This alone has gotten me hooked and from how far I've read the author writing is great. Am looking to read on this story as it's quite interesting.
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