I Am Dead

I can’t believe I struggled all the way to chapter 140 and literally is a different story from that point on. The grammar was already bad but why. you literally got rid of the story and added whatever after that point don’t waste your coins on this novel and this bozo

This story is very fun to read and the story development is better than I expected and I would love to read more from this story so I will rate it 5 stars

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Is this gonna be true harem or not?.............................Well the story basically good. The world is good too so just ignore those bad comment! Maybe you should use super power or something like that to spice the story and i think you should write more event about mc and the heroine like Luna part so the story will be more interesting...well good luck and keep up!

Im giving this three stars because i wish the author would lengethen the novel instead of this because half the novel is just the mc warming up to the idea of banging his mom we only get lemons at the final volume i wish they expanded it i hope you can author

Just found this and looking forward to reading, nice to see more undertale fanfics hopefully I can find some warframe and borderlands ones that aren't dropped after read this.

Guys this novel is literally on the level of a printed novel the character development is flawless its a bit darker than most novels you will encounter but it really drags out that excitement and on edge feeling cause you just worry about mc and the character are so well fleshed that everything they do has a reason and everyone has a motive where its not simply that they are dicks so the villains have an amazing depth to them that makes you understand them instead of simply hate them for their actions and if you like game of thrones you should give this a try from the way its developing i think courtyard politics is gonna be important and its not gonna be like normal novels where politics is important for two seconds before they just go back to survival of the fittest and mc just has a silver tongue and flawless analytical ability  you need to give this a read if youre a fan of well written stories

Aaron smirked, knowing full well that Jackson was going to train his butt into the ground to get a firm grasp on his aura. Until then he should just be appreciative that Jackson even thought to do something like this.