Jalan itu sudah mereka pelajari dua bulan yang lalu, merupakan jalan terdekat untuk tembus ke kampung Balingka. Selain menandu Michiko mereka juga membawa tiga pucuk senjata yang tertinggal oleh pasukan APRI.
In conclusion, this novel would do wonders if it had a beta reader and a qualified editor. The protagonist's personality is horrible, not because he is a villain, but because it is so poorly written and planned that it simply makes him awful. There are many VERY visible plot holes in this story that the author ignores. The characters don't feel realistic and the Mc says so much unnecessary or cringe-inducing dialogue that I just want to kick him. (rewritten review)
really good really good, i enjoyed it an done question author .... what you did learn from our great love immortal venerable ? what about our great love immortal venerable lessons ? where are there ? I'm sure the art of being shameless was a main part of his lessons, and here you are, not giving yourself a five star review sigh.... please correct yourself on that, be more shameless, because that is the way to the great love this is a part of our great love immortal venerable's lessons
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