I think that the story is pretty good so far. The chapters aren’t short, the author is consistent, and it has a really good storyline. The only issue is that there are some minimal grammatical errors. Luckily, it doesn’t take away from the story. Keep up the good work.
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Izan raised his left eyebrow before chuckling once again, he turned his head towards Robin and Sybill before asking. "I suppose that the two of you will also change your clothes before we arrive there?" Even if Izan didn't know where they'll be going, he knew that it should be a decent place as Jiutian and Defying had chosen it.
He tapped something in the camera. He was laughing. In a few seconds, I heard my phone rang. I immediately ran to the bedroom to get it. When I saw the notification panel, it was something that Delf has sent. It was a picture. It was my picture. It did not occur to me that it was my image. For a second, I did not recognize my face and my body. They modified me so much that I failed even just for a second to recognize myself. Terror filled me. My stomach hurt. My tears began to fall.
Aron smiled brighter as he said, " It was first time that I got such a unique gift." I liked it so much that I copied it in my personal diary." Kim stared at Aron hearing that and Aron also realized that he had gone a bit over the top by spilling the beans regarding copying the poem. Aron quickly changed the topic and asked ,"so you like writing? "
Jiang Xiuran spat at the corpse. It was a rough-looking man that appeared that he hadn't bathed for days, wearing strange tattered leather equipment of some kind. A gaping hole decorated his chest.
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