Hunter Cursed Beauty

The story is interesting  but I agree with the others. The grammar is half-bad although I can understand what you are trying to convey it is tiring to always guess the right words and reconstructing the sentences. You need to look for an editor. Once you release many chapters not all people has the patience to play "guess". Dont take this comment too hard. You have potential its just the grammar that's holding you back.

A very solid webnovel in it's current state. There are a few things that should be worked on such as punctuations and whatnot but the overall story is quite engaging, I like the world building and the characters aren't all that bad. The character design really doing it for but maybe that's cause I lack imagination. Overall has a great story and plot, looking forward to future chapters and what's to come.

Garbage. He’s already “not servile nor overbearing”. It hasnt even been mentioned in the novel he was transmigrated, as though the author just expected us to read the synopsis. There are no signs he was transmigrated in the novel. It just looks like hes a native. Synopsis is complete clickbait. Powers cant be revealed for some stupid reason. Like, he cant reveal them because he would be killed by the government? Why? Completely stupid.

The f man, i was expecting a good fanfic atleast and the hell is this??!! Its like your just copying the originals and just edit a few things while not affecting how things would go

This book impressed me with the authors ease to dive into and smoothly  describe action scenes. It gas a good phase, and pretty intriguing plot. Well done author! 👏

i really enjoy the so different story from the others kingdom building novel"The Lord Of Spectacle".  it's really Spectacle,   if you ask what so differentthis novel of kingdom building from others novel the same genre,it's very simple really,   if you guys remembers from all others novel we read or tested.   that the MC of the story, directly gone after transmigrationto the world to be the lord, and always cheat others on the market for selling goods at the beginning,  and also from what i remember they never gone to help others only see them as there enemy,   and also if i am not wrong we never seen that the country or a city stand behind him and help him out,  the MC'S always stand alone with the help of a system,  i must say it is a very different and original story for me anyway.i really like this novel,  hope you guys will also like it if you give it a try a bit more  :)

thank you for sharing! I love this translation the most! can't wait to read the rest!

After dinner, I got up quickly and took everyone's plate. I decided to wash the dishes especially after my crimes from the morning and being lazy for the rest of the day. The moon was out and I decided to go outside on the balcony. Both girls accompanied me. Mia-san pulled out a telescope and Oneka-senpai pulled out three foldable chairs. The chairs were set up around the telescope and we each sat down, taking turn observing the night sky.