Hunter Association Supreme

Hi there.  Thanks for choosing my book and I hope you have a great read. Updates will start from 1st July with two or more chapters daily.   Much love from the Author.

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Shameless review by the author as is apparently customary.This is my first work but I've been reading cultivation and fantasy novels on sites like this for 4-5 years now and have long outgrown the usual tropes and such, so this is my attempt to write a new story I myself would find refreshing.If you have any constructive feedback as you read, please let me know in the chapter comments so I can take it on board and adjust as I see fit.Thanks, and I hope you all enjoy!

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read until the 20th chapter so no spoiler.interesting idea and bad realization is what characterize this novel for me, I mean i understand it's a very interesting idea to have 2  entity of different *** in the same consciousness but gosh. am I the only one not finding the joke funny and instead heavy ?Plus why by the seven hell would you skip the F*****G first batle of the protagonist ????????? it's one of the key moments of the story ! how is he gonna fight, because yeah when i see "immortal" in the title and it talks about cultivation i hope that there will be battles.not to arrange the case, wtf is wrong author ? do you re-read what you wrote ? I quote "[..]He then smiled as he caressed his forehead. He can clearly feel his strength trickling a little with the unlocking of the first petal. He cheerfully said, [...]." chapter 4 on the 4th paragraph ... why are you jumping to present the back to past and you may be thinking <you just took the worst phrase in the 20 chapters after searching carefully> and the answer is NO. (it would make a too long critic to list all the spelling and gramatical error (which i do not pretend to be abstained from))now the world case,because yeah the issue above tackle the writing quality, the story development, and with character only good at pun, which are not funny I repeat just ... bad ( it's not even ***ist you kinda feel it want's to be funny but doesn't manage to and end up just being lame and heavy) the character design is also a bad point.on to the world design we were saying, right ?well, it described in three paragraphs, furthermore a dense part about the sect and power distribution WHICH IS IMPORTANT is being push at us like a hot potato and the author expect us to be like "uh ok i perfectly remember all of what you said and wont be lost for the next few paragraphs"anyway this is just my point of view on the story i understand if you don't have the same and maybe I'll read until 30% to see if it's better than what I thought (all my brave support to those hating the novel like me, but who read further).

Swordsman is one action-packed and spooky story (which Shonen Jump seems to have a lot of lately), with one of the main events of the series actually taking place on Halloween. And, while the scary season is over, the swordsman isn't, it's actually one of the most popular novels of the fall.DOMAIN EXPANSION.

It's actually quite good, I'm enjoying the read, I just have a little problem, the description of the characters, especially the women or members of the harem, we don't know if they are tall, short, if they have big, modest or small breasts, yes they have curves, a huge butt, toned, heart shaped, eye color, absolutely none of that has been mentioned, we don't even know if Allaire has wolf ears or tail or anything like that.I'm in chapter 15 btw, I hope and is changed that later, otherwise it would be a problem, if you can't describe them, then at least put a reference image in some auxiliary chapter

He called her 'baby'? She was sure that she hadn't had a boyfriend but why was this guy calling her 'baby'?