The First 40 Chapters are too monotone. The MC is too hard headed with basically no character development. He just foolishly trying to cross floors with no focus on character. Lets just get through floors like its nothing.
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Hmm....This is me reading ML genre book for the second time.... and itβs marvelous. Really, the author did a good job.... I hope to read till the end... So, keep up the writing, author!!! best wishes
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