Awesome nd quite touching. Starting from the first chapter it builds up the curiosity like... \"Hmm.. what's going on? what father did? Why these kids are discussing about him?\" And with these questions you start digging deeper in the book. (Sorry Author will kill me if I spoil further.)
Give it a try for at least 10 chapters. It is a really good cliche-break.The idea used is nothing new, but definitely fresh. The comedy is hillarious. Definitely will be a good read maybe up to 200 or more before the story goes haywire. Maybe
Well you need to be better at writing it Though it has flaws but still keep it up bro The story is great but you need better prologue the writing is A mess but at least the story is good so do your best!
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"It has," Crowley agreed. His gaze surveyed the young woman with a warm look before he smiled apologetically. "Nearly nine years. I apologize for my daughter's behavior. She is incredibly jealous of your position and wishes it was her own."
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