How I became Chief of A Small Village In Another World

A very meh story that can help fill your teeth in a pinch. The update stability is great and the quality of the translation is excellent. The world background is our own set in an old mountain mansion that has somewhat mystical properties. Here comes the drawbacks the mc is not especially interesting nor is he charismatic. This leads you to not particularly caring about him or his problems. In fact the most interesting characters are his servants who are not supposed to be so. The story development is running on a linear path that you are guaranteed to figure out in no time flat.All in all I would only recommend this novel as something of a "side dish" with low expectations, that said I also read it everyday.

this is good I want moreeee update chapters

I’d give an honest review. I really enjoy this book. It has a nice concept, good world building and the main character is well thought out. Most other characters don’t have much depth to them but it’s understandable, it’s a game with many players. I would say that I didn’t like the story development that much. It’s the classic “new power up, stronger adversaries”. How can he clash with an ancient dragon here but is scared of a baby one there. He would fight toe to toe with the strongest people in one place but go somewhere else that should on the same level but meet much stronger opponents. I know it’s for the story but I don’t like it. He can’t be losing every other mental battle, how would any other person survive on the continent if that was the case.I am also frustrated by the horrible editing further into the book, especially in the privileged chapters. These things make or break your book. Do better.I would writing a book soon and I know my review may seem harsh, but take it as constructive criticism. I do like your book hence my incessant support.

Thoroughly mediocre, and sub-par in some categories.Easy read, not a complicated story, turn brains off for plot holes, turn brains on for grammar.Let's start with the story. So far, there isn't much, but that is to be expected. The thing that drives me insane is the brokenness of the gacha. It's just a way to give the MC the stuff he needs. It's always rare, great, epic or needed. Herbs won't grow in the dungeon? don't worry, the next gacha will fix that. Want to start smithing? The gacha giveth. Unlimited materials? The gacha has your back. MC should make a shrine to the gacha and the dungeon core. Sorry, but I really hate some kind of plot device that constantly gives the MC whatever he needs at the moment for virtually no cost or effort.Speaking of the dungeon core, she is a non-character. No personality except exceptionally timid. You don't see, hear or notice her at all until she is required to pass on a message or as comic relief. Same for Kuro. The bandits need a course in Banditry 101. The most interesting quirky one was a passing adventurer. The MC dungeon master, Mr Ghost, hasn't shown much personality either except 'grandfatherly' towards a young boy. The boy's guards should be executed for being too stupid too. Mr Ghost will manage all skills. He will smith, do alchemy, fight with sword, spear, bow and magic and basically be everything this story needs and do everything that needs doing.... Right.There is no info on what a dungeon is or does, no feeling for their place in the world. Either it's something that will come up later, or it is assumed you have read similar novels before. So far, no world building.It was updating regularly until january.Finally, the writing. It's average for not very good non-native English. The sentences mostly make sense with no bad idiom, but the tenses are hopelessly mixed up. Even worse if the verb is also a noun, like a a walk / to walk. It appears the spell check the author is using is hopeless at that.

Very good novel , I enjoy very much. Looking for more chapters.Recommend for everyone.เป็นนิยายเรื่องหนึ่งที่สนุกมาก แนะนำให้อ่าน เหมาะสำหรับคนที่อ่านนิยายมาหลายเรื่อง ถึงจะเข้าใจพื้นฐานของเรื่องราว เพราะมีการอ้างอิงจากนิยายเรื่องอื่น

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One of the best novels I've read on wn, and extremely addcting to the point where I always check it the moment I open wn. Everytime I see that it's updated, I literally go over the moon.Writing Quality - Though there are a few grammatical errors, the writing style and words are nothing short of exceptional. Every thing is described nicely and easy to understand. Plus, grammar doesn't matter much these days so you get 5 stars.Stability of Updates - Love that it's updating everyday, but sadly I read too fast to be satisfied. I respect your effort for keeping up everyday! 5 stars!Story Development - A bit cliched but also has originality. Incredibly enjoyable to read, plus I like the small twists every now and then. It also makes me want to know what happens next, getting me more addcted. 5 stars again!Character Design - <Spoilers> Cool reincarnated neet from another world with the power of a god and a cold tall woman with ice powers and a cute baby. Excellent diversity so far. And the character development- oh yes the character development- exquisite~ Love how he has to change his mindset first to be able to become stronger and control his power. Also love the fact that his life mission is to get the best gf in the world.World Background - When I first read this, it left me speechless. Putting both fantasy hierarchy and the space setting is an incredible idea, plus there's also an backstory of how it came to be like that and that makes it all the more interesting to read. And it's so incredibly well written that it actually makes me think that such a setting could be real and out there somewhere in the universe.Overall Score - P E R F E C T I O NI would 100% recommend this to anyone I meet.Need more chapterrrrrs!!!(I think I'm going to need treatment for my addiction now)

I'm sinking in... you did well.👏👏👏Great start and the ability to create mental imagery is powerful in your work.keep it up, I'll be following you up.