Hope In Mind

The syntax is awful. The diction is super repetitive. The author can’t decide whether they want to write in third person or first. The logic behind some of the scenes is just so stupid and forced. Author does a good job with being super descriptive and allowing you to imagine the scenes in your mind as you read but it doesn’t rlly work with the other issues constantly breaking your immersion. I was going to read all the free chapters but couldn’t make it past chapter 6. Wouldn’t recommend.

" *Sigh* We all don't have such a convenient ability to increase our numbers, thus we are only able to search for female counterparts of our respective race and reproduce using the original way." The old Kira answered with a bitter taste in his mouth.

"Shh.." I interrupt her. "None this is your fault, what is bound to happen has already happen" I wiped the tears off her face. I embrace James in a hug, his face looks worried too. From the corner of my eyes I saw Zion clenching his jaw jealousy.

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---a week later---

- Professor Elm, temos visita - Falou um cientista apontando para as duas meninas.

Gongzi Yu berkata, "Kamu tidak punya apa-apa."

"Tanine was barely using any of his real strength against any of you, I know this because we have fought each other long ago and considering what I felt during your little skirmish, I would say he was only using about 5% of his full power" Issei along with the others that had fought Tanine were completely dumbfounded after hearing that.

"Okay sir, I do anything for that, anything ...."

It's a really good novel definitely recommend my only problem is the weekly updates I wish it were earlier but it's good nonetheless

Sooooooooooooooooo from what I can gauge from this is this is an isekai with similar plot premise, but wondering will it be harem? will it have OP characters or will it have lemon. I look at the possibilities. I can see the author has good creativity and grammar so I can only think there is more going on here and sufficient enough to tell a proper story. First look is already good and drawing me in. I am going in blind, but confident it isn't gonna drag me down. you impressed me so far Mr. Author :3

I Got Interested In This Novel Due To The Succubus,... And Author He Had Water Elemental Affinity Only, And I Guess In His Reincarnation He Gets All-Elemental Affinity Thus Making Him Unique?