Hollow Eldoria

Reading the few chapters this novel has right now (6), it has potential, the story is interesting as most non-human novels are for me, but there are some improvements to be done, the first thing is the grammar or sentence structure, don't get me wrong it is readable, but a few mistakes creep in here and there.And another is the wall of text, make paragraphs, it will be much more readable and easier for the eye to read it instead of the whole chapter being in one paragraph. I will stay tuned though and watch your progress in the near future. Keep it up!

so confused, why the chapter is soo slowly to realse, need fast new chapter

I really love the whole idea of the bookit's quite disappointing to see it's not been updated as I'd love to see more

cant wait for more chapters. really Good.The best one so far amongst The New ones. Just hope it gets tons of New chapters to enjoy it.......

The old man with purple wings and armor came before them. While Way friends give thanks.

Sai gazes at The Wiseman with her blue eyes, "But master I am confused, I am just one girl. Master you and the shrimp are just two men."

Azweena Sheikh

I know these secrets because, until yesterday I used to be a guide leader playing, reading, learning and living in the largest immersive virtual reality game based upon this world. I was a peak player and my gaming company or guild. I was very well known, until you know everyone died.