Hollow Crown: The Book of Envy

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Hello, Author here. This is a story I started on a whim for WPC #192 and somehow won bronze. The first 20 or so chapters are just me searching for directions I should be taking this novel to. So, many ideas that pop up there don't last for long. Especially, the dual personality. However, the world I build up during these times is not random. Also, please do not expect the MC to be a genius or something, and just enjoy what he does.

This is what I think I deserve after all of my soul I have poured in to this. I rewrote 80k words and what you see now is the rewritten version. I can't say for sure that now this book is  the best you have ever read but its the best I have ever written among all of my other works :DIf you have qns, criticism, praises, or anything else just reply to this XD

Hey~ this here (points at the book) is good stuff, I  had read this first in manga then I transfer to LN which is much more better... Looking forward in reading it here in Qidian... 😋😋

For a guy who was apathetic even when he's sentenced to death became a warm goody good guy as soon as he play the game? what's up with flirting around with all these npc? its like he's hitting on to every woman he comes across.. MCs character can change, but shouldn't there be a transition period !here it happened instantaneously. what's wrong with MC to drop his advantages (dude is flame talent but won't train it?? )There's these random characters popping up without propet introduction too. plus what's wrong with his levels?  isn't the prisoners supposed to be beta players !how come there are others with higher levels ! too many inconsistencies for me.  i think it's not my cup of tea. l did liked the concept though. i don't know whether the story gets better in further chapters(i only read up to 23, so this can be considered only as a first impression). nice attempt bro.  really appreciate your efforts.

The author has put a lot of effort into writing this, and he even rewrote the first few chapters several times. However, I recommend he get a proofreader, because while everything is readable, some syntax errors are very distracting to the reader. Besides that, I think the author has a very unique writing style that is amusing to read. Personally, I think his writing is a lot like how he texts in real life with his friends, and I think that this allowed many readers to feel closer to the narrator. A warning to future readers though-- the main character is very dubious and hateful while the primary love interest gets cuckolded more and more in the later chapters. The intimate scenes are also quite lacking.

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