His Guard Dog

This story is pretty shit to be honest. It's about the demon king of lust, but all he does is going a round killing everyone like a psycho. it wouldn't be bad if it at least somewhat lived up to the 'lust' persona, but it honestly just feels like the author was bullied as a kid and is writing out his 'death note' so he doesn't become an actual serial killer. 100% recommend SKIP.

I liked how the story is developing by slowly builfing up suspense for the reader and character development for the future.I dont want to spoil so i wont but i suggest reading the auther does a few chapters a day amd it is good

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My first ever review on any story, I think... but I like how this story is going, it’s just you have to have good memory on some of the characters cause the author (in my opinion) will sneak in small and sometimes large amounts of information the story background is great, and the main character seems like he has a few screws loose but makes up for it in humor. ———————————————————————                                  (Spoiler)———————————————————————The only thing that should be talked or done more is him digging another pit or hole 😄 I just find it funny, just a bunch of holes with spikes in random areas and he gets exp for at random times

Although i like MCs fame, the leveling and overpoweredness just happens too soon and is too ridiculous and outlandish. Not even 1% grounded.

Niceee. Minimal grammar errors and a gripping sequence! I'm really really into the detective and mystery genre so I have quite high hopes with this novel :>

It's my novel so I would like to think it's amazing. I hope you do as well and look forward to what happens. If you have any questions, feel free to ask!

Wow, really interesting read! The story has a really cool concept and super interesting premise! The writing is also good, and the details help to build the scene and the character dialouge as well, are more than good! There are few grammatical errors and sometimes confusing sentence structure, but other than that, this was really interesting and super well edited! I recommend this story to readers looking to dive into a mysterious interesting world the author has set up! Keep up the good work author, :)!