I like the story very much. I'm also very intrigued about why Song Tian's eyes become golden and almost everyone has a system or it's going to inherit one. I hope the story continued to by so interesting.
Great story that brings you in and captivates you. The story is full of twists and supporting and antagonist characters all with interesting stories. Also I like that the main character is not overpowered and struggles in his advancement and needs help from chance or side characters. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapters.
Just trying to write a story and no story is perfect. Hope you enjoy it nonetheless and feel free to add feedback here or in the chapters! Been writing for a few years now but I still consider myself a newbie so go easy.
During lunch time Zoey asked why I missed school because i never have in the past, so I told her how I slept in because i stood up to late doing homework. She also asked why i didn't play gym so i told her a lie, that i wasn't feeling so good and had a stomach ache.
A few days pass and the Empire mourned the Queens death. The King was despondent of the sudden death of his wife and the mother of his children. Leonidas and Alexander were also quite broken up but the sudden death of the Queen or more the way she died brought the brothers to boiling point where both of them blamed each other for their mothers death. Leonidas walked to the room where the intruders were staying and as he opened the door he had noticed something on one of the woman's wrist that looked familiar but couldn't figure out what it was. As he was about to speak he heard loud bangs coming from the training room followed by the grunts and shouts of Alexander.
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