Help! I’m a Shameless Omega in a High School Full of Alphas

It’s a great story just wish there were more chapters to read

Written after chapter 108 :I found something great in this story. Something I didn’t know I missed, something I wasn’t looking for, but something I needed :The MC plays a MMORPG, with a GROUPu202f!!!(of soon-elite-to-be-players, of course but nonetheless)Yes, I know, incredible right ? but having so many stories in online-game-settings, ending with the OP-MC soloing everything by himself, becomes boring…And yet here you are, a story where the MC falls in a prison of sort, with fellow inmat…sorry, members following, having to build a team to get out of here, in a kind of good-feeling-village settings.And I have great hopes for what will follow.I hope that this village-feeling won’t disappear later on, and that the relationship within the group will be reinforced.And I also liked the MC calling his best friends to share his OP-discovery to play together.That’s how you are supposed to play such games…Oh, and we have real IRL city names for the IRL parts, which is way, way better than the usual « X city » and such.Notes :Writing Quality : 4,5/5=> here and there some missing words and some typos, the writing-style is good for meStability of Updates : 3/5=> my fan-thinking is taking the better of me here and I NEED the rest of the story right now y’know ? hence the harsh note. But I understand that quality takes time, so…Story Development : 5/5=> so far so good, a good balance between IRL and in-game storyCharacter Design : 5/5=> the MC story and personality is credible for now, the IRL shows some real nice things, I like it. The group is being built right now and I am eager to know who will be the next members :-)World Background : 5/5=> Real city names. Period.

Oh well, what can I say, I like my novel a lot and I recommend it to everyone :DBook 2 (chapter 45 onwards) is probably much better than the first. Cherry and I really worked hard on it and tried to fix the inconsistencies in book 1. I really hope we will be able to deliver the paperbook in the next weeks. It will be available on amazon.com We have a lot of italian readers but I really look forward to see how our novel will fare in the international stage. Have a good read!

Ah yes, another weak-to-strong story to go wild for. And it has the premise of a revenge plot to boot. This is another novel that I'd read up to chapters of four digits-- so I hope it gets up to that much at least ;D

Why are the girls and women in this story so weird? Either they are perverts or sexual assaulters... Not one woman was mentioned without sexual thoughts including the MC's mother! The author doesn't know how to write women. The pacing of the story is very summary like. It's the type of things I would expect from an article review of the story rather than the actual story...The world building is almost nonexistent... All I know about the place is that it's the modern world with hidden martial artists. I had good expectations at the beginning but it just went downhill after the students started sexually assaulting the mc in public because of his sweat. The parents of the MC are also there just for name's sake. They contribute almost nothing to the story except their existence. Sorry to say this Author but this is my honest opinion.

'How did he—? When?' You thought in total surprise.

This was too realistic to be a dream. I looked into the woman's eyes as my heart felt a tinge of pain.

"I'd much prefer to get something nice to eat before I died. I smell some good stuff, is it beer?"