The writing quality is mostly good, very little mistakes and the reading flows well.Characters development so far is good, I appreciate the details some of the minor characters have. Though I don't really see too much original thought in the characters they are plenty good enough. I enjoy reading about all of them.World building so far is adequate as it is just the first 20 chapters.Great story with an original concept though I can forsee issues in the future with creating movies for the MC to act in I think it will be interesting to follow. Love it so far.Updates are somewhat stable, hope for more as always.Written at Chapter 21
I love it, it's a good wishfullment novel. keep it up, author.........................................................................................................................................................................................................
Read only few chapters so far, gotta say I'm intrigued by this, it seems like it's going to be a very thrilling story! the writing is beautiful and extra point for the good grammar only a little criticism is that introducing to many characters at the beginning could confuse other readers, but overall this is off to a good start.
I read the first chapter because the title make me curious and now i'm obliged to wait every update. Only downside is that chapters are too short.Side note: there is no system in the story for now.
It's sooo sad ...the book has been stopped. It's not going to be updated anymore...???Author kindly let us know...ur book was very nice n very interesting story.
Sebelum pergi, Pak Anton telah berpesan pada pengacara dan ahli hukumnya untuk mengurus semua surat-surat penting yang diperlukan dan segala keperluan hidup kami. Pak Anton juga sempat memberikan uang tambahan untuk modal usaha ayah. Bahkan ia ingin membiayai pendidikan Helen. Niatnya sih, mau sampai Helen kuliah tapi ayah sama ibu benar-benar hampir kena serangan jantung. Melihat itu, akhirnya Pak Anton cuma bisa pasrah dengan hanya membiayai pendidikan Helen selama duduk di bangku SD saja.
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