Hell Bound Legacy

Ok, I know that may some people won’t agree with me. However, after reading the whole 40 chapters the only way of how to describe this novel would be boring and slow. This is the misunderstanding-type novel, but the main problem here is that usually that types of novels are funny or at least interesting to read. However, this one is just boring. In the beginning the it was almost everything about the MC, but that changes about chapter 20 where the MC only makes 20% of the novel and the rest is only his “pets” talking. I wouldn’t have a problem if the pets were funny to read, but their plot or story are too fucking boring to the point it only feels like useless filler.  Not only that but even the parts with the MC are too boring to read too.

for all the people saying the mc is a pedo. it was a mistranslation. the girl is 20 and not 12. the numbers are extremely similar in chinese, so the translator genuinely just made a mistake.

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Writing Quality: 3/5 Your writing is not bad but you have a few problems with punctuation, and a bit unnecessary wording. Updating Stability: 5/5 I put everyone's like this. Story Development: 4/5 The pacing of your story is good, please keep up with that. I like the plot developing, although I did tend to get a bit bored at times, but it did not stop me from fully leaving. Character Design: 3.5/5 (I have to round to four on the thing) I feel the MC to be a bit bland, but not all the bad as a character. I do like the other characters you added and how you give their personality through their dialogue. World Background: 4/5 I enjoyed the first chapter the most in the sense of world building, you did a good job at painting a picture on your world. In conclusion, the story is not bad, it is interesting but at the same time could get a bit boring. But getting past the boring part, the story is good. Keep up the good work, author.

Liu Yang had a cheap watch on his left wrist, but it was already broken even before he entered this space. The timer display had been frozen in place.

The fusion of two opposing forces.

<p>Looking around, I realized that even though I was only five, I had already proven that my mind was capable of handling more than people gave me credit for. I was ready to take on the world—one experiment at a time.</p>

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