Heavenly Rebellion: The Human Race's Rise to Prominence

I obviously recommend my book, but it really would be my type of read. A combination (sometimes) too obvious, fantasy with real problems of modern society, especially the author. But as the master, stephen king said: all our characters carry a little bit of us. Thus, my characters and events in the book are, in the same way that they represent my view of the world, situations I see and people I know. I can say that the purpose of the book is to represent each one's hero's journey, as we are all protagonists in our biographies.

I really tried to enjoy this story but after 50 chapters I can confidently say it's not worth your time. The grammar is not great but I've read enough web novels to be numb to it at this point. The system messages are overly repetitive, and constantly bombard you with 'ding'. The MC is genuinely the dumbest I've ever read. He is incredibly 'lucky' and his plot armor is so thick it would be more accurate to call it a plot nuclear bunker. The author introduces a McGuffin only to resolve it half a chapter later. In one case the system gives a quest to tame a lightening spirit hawk, immediately after an injured lightening spirit hawk lands directly at his feet. This sort of 'plot' development happens every chapter. When I was 5 years old I wrote a story for my grandma about a worm called Steve who was an army soldier. It had more character development than this novel.

Grabbing Leon by the hair, Reginold shoved the knife against Leon's chest, dragging the knife ever so carefully along Leons flesh. The knife cut cleanly through the Leon's clothing, only to cut even deeper into his skin. Leon gritted his teeth in pain, trying to ignore the pain as best he could. He had to do this, he had to give his son time to escape. He could only hope that his guards were evacutating the village.

You'll never shine if you don't glow

"Come let's go to sleep" Josh invited the little girl that sitting on the chair. She doesn't know what to do or what to do.

"Crap." I quietly and quickly left the room, closing it behind me then using my speed to get back to the car.  I remembered I have that guys phone and dialed TJ's number. She immediately answered "This is Summers, what do you want?" She sounded tired and stressed. "Is that any way to be talking to the love of your life?" I smiled to myself, driving to get me and Mac food. "A-Adriana? baby where are you?" Her voice picked up and she surprisingly stuttered. "Florida" I pulled into a Wendy's, pulling into the drive thru. "Hold on babe." I ordered me and Mac food then went back on the phone.

Bai was disgusted at her expression, "Hmph, so you are a goody two-shoes. You won't steal, won't trick and won't set up traps. And you still want to play chess? Isn't chess all about using tactics to trap and outsmart the opponent? You will never be any good. Wasting time."

Dusk: Dusk is fine, but I've come here to make a proposition for you exclusively today