Heavenly Dao's Chosen (Old, rewriting it)

  • Genre： Eastern
  • Author： GoldenStrider
  • Translator：
  • Status： Ongoing

  • Rating(4.3 / 5.0) ★

Maxwell was once hailed as a child prodigy, but everything changed after he and fiancé stumbled upon a cultivator's tomb and his fiancé awakened her constitution. He could no longer cultivate and everyone bullied him and his sister.
He never gave up and instead trained.
After 10 years of struggling he finally managed to breakthrough, soon he would shock the entire continent.

{There will be at most 2000 words per chapter and I will release 5 chapters a week. Right now I'll give a bonus chapter for 50 Power Stones and then 100.}

[This is my first novel, I hope you like it and I appreciate any feedback, At the start the story is a bit shaky but I hope you read further when I improve it.]

[The cover art is AI generated :) from Midjourney]

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  1. Ronald Masefield
    Ronald Masefield rated it
    Wow This book is too great and can't be ignored.
    The writing quality is soo awesome that it  hoks yiu and you barely can leave it.
    The story is too interesting,  action and strong that it burns you to read on just by looking at the book cover.
    Loved the plot.
    Good luck author
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  1. Tracy Cooke
    Tracy Cooke rated it
    I'm going to shamelessly give myself 5 stars. I hope you stick through the first 5 chapters at least before deciding if you like my book or not. I strive to improve my writing every chapter and I would love honest feedback.
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  1. Winston Albert
    Winston Albert rated it
    I hope you read at least a few chapters before deciding whether you like it or not since the first few are a little bit fast paced and the conversations are not that smooth. I will try to upload at least 5 chapters a week and improve my writing quality every chapter.
    Each chapter will be around 2000 words
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  1. Derrick Longfellow
    Derrick Longfellow rated it
    Hi, I personally think it's a really enjoyable story!

    I'm not sure how to describe it, but the jargon that you're using sets me in the world fast. Really nice stuff instead of spelling it out, haha!

    By the way, how did you come up with the name Orphelia? I really like the ring to it!
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  1. Sandy Morton
    Sandy Morton rated it
    Pretty awesome start. This book is so great. The plot is very interesting that it hooks you from pages to pages. I asume there will be a lot to read from this story.
    Not to mention, the writing style is simply and easy understanding. Great work author
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  1. Curitis Wheeler
    Curitis Wheeler rated it
    The story development looks wonderful...I took an overview and it seems nice.... everything seems so clear to understand...names of characters are no difficult to carry-on with....
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  1. Chasel Evelina
    Chasel Evelina rated it
    First of all, if this is your first book, then it's more than great.
    The structure of the paragraphs and sentences along with the good grammar and punctuation are very well taken care of.
    Although I don't like cultivation novels, I really enjoyed this one. Good plot and ideas.
    Everyone should really give it a try.
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  1. Theresa Sandy
    Theresa Sandy rated it
    This book reminds me of the old cultivation novels... It's nice.

    There aren't many bad points in the novel. The grammar and punctuation are both decent. Proper spacing and sentence structuring. My only issue with it is that it feels a bit rushed. The chapter lengths are good in my own opinion  but it just feels a bit rushed. Dialogue isn't a lot, and feel stiff as well...

    Altogether it is very good, but would be even better if these issues addressed...
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