He doesn't want me

    Author: ash wednesday
  • Status: Ongoing

Rating(3.4 / 5.0, 23 votes)
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  1. Kelvin_Sekwati
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    The headmaster hugged Gray and Gray reciprocated. Today was his last day as a normal human being, as from that day on he would be a Walker
  1. SaintArgusPcc
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    "Thirty-one ka na. Dapat ka nang maghanap ng mapapangasawa." Tukso nito sa kanya.
  1. NStarXnN
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    "Something has been bugging you for a while but you won't tell what."
  1. DjinnofNovel
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    Loki let out a sigh as he looked down at his Rykar, who was exaggeratingly snoring as saliva trickled down his lip. "Dumbass. Ok, stop messing around. How did it actually go?"
  1. Nalumntz
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    "And I am in class Vlll-C. Would you like to drink hot chocolate with marshmallows. That's what I get everytime I come. It's my favorite. "
  1. AlibiLullaby
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    Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming
  1. NStarXnN
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    So much to do, so much to see
  1. AH15
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    `Speak only for yourself,´ Alucard replied with a smirk.
  1. crownklownejD
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    The story has potential, i like it. Waiting for more chapters 😁
  1. Mr_hypocrite
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    Good start, not super original, but promising. The only complaint is the quality of the translation. It feels like MTL posted raw, no human editing. Too many mix-ups in gender pronouns, female characters routinely get referred to as "he
  1. PudgeyTheBird
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    I'll finally give myself 5 stars, like other authors do.Why am I writing this now? To inform you about my, at first, inconsistent writing style. Initially, I used my work as a progression tracker, but now I feel some connection with it.Really, I wanted to improve my writing with this being a 'side project', and it is visible each chapter.Spacing, vocab, logic, character development, and, mainly, the thoughts and feelings deepness — everything improves steadily, at some point I dare to say exponentially.When you start reading my work, please, bare with the pacing and, sometimes, unusual writing style. I feel the story itself evolves quite well and also develops significantly more in the future chapters.

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