Haunted Adeline

So far i've only read the 20 chapters available so i can't speak much about the novel, my only complaint currently would be certain translation choices, the term Budo for example, also in one chapter spears are called guns.It's easily the best of this batch of trial reads and i can totally see the future potential of the novel, it's not like some trial reads where the MC is already near the strongest around in 40 chapters.

Niceee. Too bad I don't exactly see why it takes 8 months to rewrite something.. Cya soon I guess?Okayayyayayayayyayayayyayayayayyayayayayyayaayayyayayayayyayayayayayyaayyayayayyayyayayayyayayayayayayyy

great world building and character development

I will review if Author comes back because this FanFic is fire,absolutely beautiful except some little, tiny errors in words but that is it. It is beautifully done fast-pace,"spoiler" but I am waiting for his mana or divine body and ?Evolution? or similar word, read it and you will understand. I have not found other mistakes. AUTHOR, COME BACK, I WANT MOAARRR OF YOUR DRUGS!

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i have read up to 20 chapters so far so good

He was shivering and sweating, zypher knew he was lying but she didn't want to push it any further

Luck> 5 Attack> 0.5