Seriously this has got to have the worst stability on updates... its been 2 almost 3 weeks since the last update, the story is great and I love it but goodness gracious don't read till 2028 since that seems like the year it will be finished at this rate. it does not deserve to go premium with this quality.
Based on what I read, this novel has quite detailed and vivid imagery, especially when describing each character's pain or reactionary. The prologue is pretty good, to be honest especially with the pirate's settings.As for the MC, I think he is fine for now and I like that he has a close relationship with someone. But, I hope I can see more about the background of his life and further development.For the cons, this is my personal taste, but I guess I need to add more detail when showing things such as objects like the pirate ships and character appearance. Personally, I am kind of hard to imagine their appearance since I love to see a well-detailed appearance.I think that's all I have to say, thank you very much and Keep up the good work!!!
Bro super good chaptersSuper good storyAlso super good charactersBut I think you should more elaborate things like the action scenes and character design and looks And why are you showing us the human protagonist???
Her mind kept asking those questions but her hazy mind prevented her to think clearly. If only she knew that the one who was talking to her was her so-called-best friend, who now was showing a displeasure and full of disdain expression towards her.
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