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MTL read it. It was below average, the only thing it really had going for it was that the protagonist was a good guy, and some of the villians got to be redeemable, but turned into harem, ofc, and for someone born on earth, he became pretty arrogant and cliche very quickly. By the 200s of chapters, he mind controls some random girl (who in all fairness was contributing killing intent to him), and the first thing he has her do is massage his back for him, then not even a chapter later, holds hands with some girl, decides she is his woman, and he will be ruthless to anyone who even thinks about her...yeah not my cup of tea. If this is picked tho, can translator not repeatedly call some of the girls who end up in his harem little girls? Like over and over they are called little girls, then they contribute eroticism/lust to him, so Im thrown off bc their actions and how they speak are childish af, not how someone over the age of 12 would act. The MC, a 17 year old, calls them little girls, but then theyre freaking have s** dreams and lusting over the mc?? When they say little boy in this, they are always kids, 6 or 7, but when they say little girl in this, how old are they actually?? Rant over
Such a captivating start to the story. Definitely an interesting read, the writing quality is marvellous. It contains the perfect balance of dialogue and narration. I believe a lot of people would really enjoy it. I hope it get more notice! Good work author, keep it up!
i am very happy that author thought of continuing it ! i am going to support it with all my heart , best wishes for the author, good things comes sudden !! π€
She was a frail creature, a Demihuman. Canine, he thought at a guess, though she could be a particularly long-furred, short-tailed feline breed, too. At a guess, he figured she was likely half-starved, but the plain gray smock she wore suggested that she'd caught someone's eye in District Six. She looked to be about sixteen, with long, filthy hair that fell to past her hips. Thanks to the filth, he wasn't certain about her hair color, but guessed it was a dark brown, maybe chocolate-brown. Her ears, canine or feline, were sharply-pointed, and twitched towards him as the gate squealed open, her head staying down with her hands up to protect it. Half-healed welts covered her forearms, which were discolored by bruises, as though she'd been savagely beaten. Judging by the trembling in her left arm, she might even have a fractured bone.
She was found in the forest a year ago when the two of them were seven years old. Her father didn't really want to save her, but Yun Zin, who had a soul on earth, decided to save her.
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