note- I am a big amateur when it comes to writing reviews.but I will still give it a try.1. My Favorite part of this novel was the writing quality. I think that the author put a fair amount of work pleasing the readers with his writing capabilities which he absolutely did.2. As you all may know, the story revolves around a protagonist who got transmigrated into a game that he used to play. and the bad news is that he got put into the body of a person who got NTRed which explains the title. The story revolves a lot about fighting and a lot of cuckolding (not the mc whos doing the cuckolding because he is actually the one getting cucked but ofc its part of the development of the story).one of the key factors on why the novel got such a bad rating is because of how inconsistent the updates and development were. I can clearly understand that some people are just getting mad because of how slow the story is, and that is where the inconsistency comes into role. imo, if you are going to try writing a slow-paced story, I would recommend uploading more chapters per week. 1 chapter per week is not really ideal if you want your story to be highly rated and so on. It may be because the author has some work to do irl and because it is only a hobby but it may have been a bit better to upload a bit more than once per week. (for example villain cultivator, endless path infinite cosmos etc)I actually got a bit confused about the choices of the protagonist considering that he has played the game before and why he did not make use of his knowledge. I mean, if he did not even have knowledge about the game why would we readers even need the 'useless' information? I mean should he not have a bit of an advantage so that he does not start from "scratch"?I wont really pick on the protagonists development because I actually considered the amount of chapters it has unlike those people complaining about why the protagonist is such a wuss and so on.overall it is decent and it couldve had a better, overall "look" to it if it was less slow paced but thumbsup for the author.
Everything is excellent so far. The only problem with the novel is that the updates are slow but since the chapters are big and the author might have IRL stuff to do so I won't complain much. I also like the fact that the author makes the illustrations by himself. The illustrations are amazing. Keep up the work author.
Read till chapter 22. Overall a very good novel.The only problem I have with this novel is that the story until now occurs in 3 or 4 days since Mc's Transmigration.I am not saying that plot progression is slow but it just doesn't feel believable for this much plot progression occurs in first four days.Try doing short time skips (days to weeks but not years). By that I mean, make Mc's Age progression along with plot progression. Spread out plot progression along Mc's schooling & ***** years instead of compacting it by doing plot progression Day by Day. You will be burnt out to write content very quickly. But this is Author's novel. He can do whatever he wants with his novel.
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Seems a bit redundant. Idk… take over the women in his family, go to next kingdom, do the same seems to be general layout. it’s not bad I guess but when you add in the fact that he won’t have to struggle or put in much effort to gain the women in his family because their love for him is 90+, I have a feeling I won’t enjoy it as much as I could have. But for those of you looking to read something like this, where a son conquers the entire family etc, this is probably right up your alley. One bit of advice I have for the author is to change Bro -> Brother. And don’t say bro in every sentence the little sister says. Whether or not it’s a Chinese setting, bro in every sentence and in and of itself seems a bit off to me. Then add on the fact that it is a Chinese setting, using the word brother would definitely be the more suitable choice. If you ever go back to edit things, I think scaling down the numbers would make it more easier to understand. Numbers in the thousands and then millions just for dealing with one session of s * x is about… yeah. You could easily get away with making everything 100* smaller and not losing out on anything. I’ll be dropping for now. If this appears on the rankings because it’s become very popular i might pick up again. See you later, maybe.
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