God Of Humanity

The story is well-written which shows the skill of the author in writing. It has a solid world background but putting a lot of introduction for the first chapter makes the intro of the story a bit low in the intense aspect. The storyline caught my interest so I hope you can make the story more exciting in the following chapters ahead since there are only 3 chapters currently.

At start, the author was giving a lot of details, which is not bad, the prologue was also good, what is the being that the gods have to fight? Its a really interesting premise, the best part is character design, over all it is a great story with consistent updates, if the author's writing quality remains the same, and he does not drop it, then it is destined to get popular. (pls end the hiatus quickly)

As someone who really like Mythology, and Fate Franchise, I really like how this story is planning out. However the first few chapters was bit slow but then it quickly speed up. the small introduction of the God and Goddess are nice as well. it make me want to know more about them. It had great idea but would need improvement in writing