Around chp 200 and so the MC is so fking stupid. They have bikes, more than enough food, guns and superpowers yet they still fking follow other victims, just to get caught by the Lee corporation and become a member of their army? What fking stupid shit is this. They have nothing to write so they just add in fillers. You might say this is a turning point of the story, but it's written in a fking idiotic and stupid way. Fk this stupid story. Don't read. It'll make you go crazy of how stupid the MC is.
You'll must be thinking... "Why did this stupid guy give this novel a 5 star review?"It's simple really.... because it was a harem.. that's all I need :D
this novels is okay, interesting world setting but mediocre story, protagonist is bland, plot story kinda forced, inconsistency characters is exist here, romance is bad, but cultivation is good.definitely not good for avid reader who read tons of novels.great novels for ppl who just started reading into east fantasy novels.good for ppl who seek cultivation novels.this is good novels but there is tons of better novels out there if u dont mind reading novels other than chinese.i believe coiling dragon is better than this novel, although the characters in cd so similar in this novel, actually every characters in iet novels very similar, well characters making is not iet forte.if you guys seek for overpowering cultivation novels then read iet novels, if you seek great story search elsewhere
I think It was better before he entered the events of the Empress of the Moon and he saved her younger sister and thinks about hitting him. She prepared cheap comedy in anime.
I don't know about other people but I can't really sit through and read although the stuff might be explained later. I just can't bear the fact that "Desire" knows things that are not supposed to be known by infants. Maybe this is supposed to be some reincarnation type but I'm dropping here. Bye
This was an interesting read.Though the first chap was a bit of an info dump, it was still easy to read.Writing quality is pretty good, with little to no errors.I am not able to say much as only 1 chap out.Still, if I have to be critical then I suggest describing the characters' appearance and the world around them like buildings etc.Overall, good work there.Good luck.
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A pretty good story I am excited for more to come hope you keep up the same pace like you are doing write now I like the pace, your plotting of the characters and Story line is very good, nice keeping me to read daily it's your talent hope you keep writing for US
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