Qidian should take note of novels with very high no. of chapters..what do you expect people to do when there are about 4000+ chapters and release is only 5 chaps a week it's really ridiculous..either appoint more translators or increase the release stability..
average writing quality, average storytelling and just barely average translation quality. And for me the problem isn't related to that there are other novels with similar storylines, there are only so many stories that can be told and if someone does it better than I have no problems whatsoever that I have already read a similar story. And that is where the problem is with this story, I have read a similar story that was written much better. The storytelling was much better, there is a natural progression in strength increase and not sudden hikes, and things happen for a good reason. Characters are written well and they have good motives for their actions. All things that I have not found in this novel. And I haven't even spoken about the dodgy translations where I'm constantly thinking 'no the author couldn't have meant this? or could he?' (P.S. in my star evaluation I have filled in the updating stability as if it was translation quality)
I think that this one was really similar to Night Ranger and The Legendary Mechanic on here. There is going to be something happening soon and the MC arrived before that event. He begins to prepare for it. I caught up to like ch 500 through the MTLs but I got tired of MTL. Good to see that this is back. I think my criticisms have to do with the characters being kind of flat and one dimensional. But I think the action and other parts of it make up for it. Other series that are similar to this one are Age of Adepts and Warlock of the Magus World. If you liked any of the before mentioned series, then I think you'll like this one.
After reading through half the available chapters so far the only thing I can say about this novel is tha it is way too addicting to put down,The first thIng that sets this apart from your cliche shounen isekai is the plot and character development. It excels at creating realistic compelling characters that are brimming with personality in an equally interesting complex plot with many things happening in the background. Not only that, but the diction is very unique and smooth and you can really feel the thought and effort into picking each word as not only is the author’s vocabulary expansive, but also very expressive and intrigueing and bascially never boring.If I had to use a simile it would be like using a different weapon each time when shooting a target, never missing and always hitting the bullseye which would be how i decribe the author’s mastery and control over their diction. Also with the great character development at the start which features excusively the previous world works as a great contrast and indicator of the mc as she progresses through the story which is a way to make a isekai story more complex and interesting even though most of them once they get isekai’d almost never mention the prevoius world and their past life. The story also doesn’t rush plot and takes it time to world build, which may be slow in the beginning, it makes the world ever immersive.
Amazing storytelling, attention to details is impeccable as well, but i do hope the author could pace the character's dialogues a bit to make it sound more natural. the rest of the writing is good as always...keep up the great work, hoping to read quality scifi from you
This review is not a short little sentence giving five stars and saying a single sentence which is I liked it, nor is this a short review giving 3 stars say that it's not good and I expect better latter on. This is a real review giving genuine criticism something only a human can do not just some recycled line from a comment bot.The writing is good simply put it's good your writing level is already near-professional I haven't spotted any typos or major grammatical errors most of your sentence flow well and have no issues with them.Though your chapters are very sporadic and random, I'd recommend that if you write more than you need in a day you should stockpile. Them and wait a day or a few hours before reposting so it gets as much exposure on the updated list as possible so more people can see it. That way your schedule would be more organized afterward, and you would be able to get more views.The main content for this is mostly religious text but the way that it's communicated is mostly through the author's personal anecdotes which is what makes the story worth reading. Just religious text and content may make a book but it probably wouldn't be good the bible already exists what's the need to rehash it. The anecdotes in this story are good usually, anecdotes don't just stem from how interesting your life is but the context and what your willing to share. This story is pretty transparent you can see the reflection of the author in it which is what makes it good. You need reliability and humanity in a book and that's what makes it interesting what lets the reader sympathize and learn.I'm not religious and I'm not interested in becoming religious I was an Athesist turned agnostic. I'm not going to lie I scoffed at parts in the story because it doesn't fit in with my ideologies. But I read it anyway so I'm going to share a personal anecdote.When I was in school, Elementary or Preschool I can't quite remember I was talking to this kid he was talking about God and I told him I didn't believe in God he told me I was a sinner and he would never talk to me again, and he convinced a few other kids not to talk to me either I was pretty upset at the time, but after a few days I pretty much forgot about it I had my own friend group at the time and wasn't really affected. But after a month he came up to me and said he was sorry, he was in the wrong and he accepted that and apologized. Although I was young at the time I accepted it and moved on. The point of that is it doesn't matter if your religious or not all people are human beings and deserve as much respect if someone is an Atheist and in the wrong, they should apologize, same with Christians or any other religion, we're all people so don't go out of your way to antagonize people for their religion. You think you're just trying to persuade them into dropping their religion but you don't notice what it does to them afterward.As for whether or not this really belongs on Webnovel who can say it's not something that you would conventionally see on this website. But as for if it belongs or not that's up to you author.
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