Ghost Wife My Lifetime Love

Dear readers, this is my new novel.  This new novel will cater to both male and female readers.  If you want to see MC change from weak to strong and finally become immortal, do not hesitate to collect it. If you want to see MC and heroine have a vigorous love, do not hesitate to collect it.

As of writing this review, I’ve only read up to Chapter 16. The author’s writing style could use improvements, especially when it comes to tenses, grammar and phrasing. From the chapters I’ve read so far, I keep getting the feel that there is a lack of direction for the plot and details with respect to world/setting. Sometimes it seems to me the MC was just running around places and doing things, being silly, asking questions that aren’t getting solid answers and evaded by other characters. This all makes it hard to grasp what’s going on with the plot/character development. Mystery is good for a story but when reading this, I felt there was too much strange mystery happening and not enough answers as a reader. Or perhaps it’s the way the MC is narrating the story that doesn’t really resonate with me. In fact, I kind of find the MC annoying with his dealings. I have to admit that this isn’t really my cup of tea. However, if you are into magical realism, creatures of the night with hints of romance in the background then this story may be for you.

Hurray! I thought this story would be liked that of a horror movie, at the beginning I was very hesitant because it's my first time reading stories like this. I was only curious but as I go along reading it, I started  liking the story. Thanks author.

The story is fast paced and has the potential to shine as the author further dwells into the happenings.

Though there are a few grammatical errors, it doesn't take away from the overall sentence structures and is a good read.

There area few horror scenes that are not my cup of tea but then am a faint-hearted person.

Expect more quality work from the author.

You just need a bit of work on grammar , but other than that it's really good. It gets more and more interesting ! Keep it up author. Btw I'm not done with it yet but I'm far enough into it to leave a review.

The novel has potential. It's nicely paced and even though there are some grammar problems, it doesn't pose much reading difficulty to me and I easily grasped what's going on. Folks, give it a try. It's a hidden gem.

absolute ****, immensely retarded mc, beta to the point he wont even ask any questions if some one beats him to death, does opposite things of what others says and gets into trouble, no power levels information from author, actually so little information that mc feels more retarded than he already is, and even if hes weak as **** he'll try to go to somewhere to face last boss. all in all ****ed up mc, if you can tolerate this, you should read this novel

Man do I love this book this is the best I have read in a while thanks to the writer and editor..but it cook really use some better editing...please look into that..