Get Boned : MHA Fanfic

good read. satisfying.

First I would like to tell that I'm not good at English so please bear my review. I've been looking for something new where a main character is transported to another world then do kingdom building. This hits right off the mark, the writing quality if great I think, I don't know how to judge it but it's great since I understand it clearly without making myself awkward while reading it. The story development, hmm since it's only 12 chapters I think it is going steady and not that a fast paced. I'm looking forward when the mc is crowned as an Emperor and have a wife because an emperor must have a queen to rule right? Character design, well I like Thomas Harrier, he is a rational and intellectual person but that personality was affected by Alexander de Romanoff, a body which he is currently possessing, a playboy and loves to fool around according to the description. He is loved by his emotional beautiful silver-haired sisters and Alexander also loves them. So whenever a emotional scene appears, Thomas is conflicted with emotion because he is acting like he is not used  to before thanks to the influence of Alexander affecting him in a subconscious level.  Well I don't know if the prince he's alive or not. As for Thomas Harrier's intellect, I'm looking forward of him inventing modern technologies. Since he is reincarnated in a world similar to the early twentieth century, I believe it's feasible to create computers like you know skip the vacuum tubes and build transistors for computers, build modern battleships with sonars and radars, build main battle tanks akin to the 1950s or 1960s, 1950s cars, electric appliances to further his economy. Oh, didn't I tell you that Thomas Harrier has a grasp of knowledge in medicine? I won't spoil much but in the early chapters, our main character is synthesizing a streptomycin, a cure for tuberculosis to save his little sister who is afflicted with the disease. So I am looking forward for him to modernize medicine and invent medical equipment as well and win Nobel prize for medicine or physiology. This is just me giving you ideas author~sama.After reading the last chapter, I feel that our mc will transition the Empire into a constitutional monarchy because of the pressure of the people. You better listen to your people if you don't want them to revolt against you. I don't know if this is considered a smart move or not but I will say anyway, listening to your people is a best way to revitalize your country as their the driving force of your economy, without people there is no nation. The antagonist of the story is not yet fleshed out, probably because is in it's early chapters so I don't expect much from them for now but please don't forget about them. I'm looking forward for our villain here.  Based on the story, our mc is the prince of Ruthenia Empire, which is based off the Russian Empire. An empire with a lot of population, lands, mineral reserves, oil reserves, golds, diamonds and has a potential to be a world superpower if not only for the predecessor of  Alexander Romanoff who misgoverned the country, leading it to its economic downfall leading to workers strikes, protest, and civil unrest.  The stability of updates is great, two chapters a day is enough for meThis is the first novel I've read where the setting is not in Germany, so it's refreshing. Enough with the German science is the best in the world, in this story, it will be the Ruthenia's science. I hope this novel won't get cancelled just because it is similar to Russian Empire. Because we all know the ongoing conflict with Russia and Ukraine. That's all have a good day author and may the god bless you ideas to further this novel. Long live the Emperor, long live Ruthenia! .

I do love what you have written............. ..............................................That is why I have thought of giving the 5 stars...................... I hope you will continue to write more novels...................... Thank you for sharing your ideas and also to enter you lovely,creative and imaginary mind through your words................

Really nice story. The progression is really nice, the characters are really interesting and the world is really alive.My only possible problems are that the level progression in-game is too harsh for monster hunter players, that's so unbalanced, it still make sense in the novel, but it still bothers me. it's really refreshing to read a story about being back on time in which the mc don't know every little detail and right answer, he was at best a casual gamer and I feel represented by that cause games are so expensive nowadays and even take longer to be launched and sold where I live so if I managed to play that game I would probably know as much stuff as him, knowing some big things but having no idea about detailed stuff.

I dont unterstand why would the son of a clan head that knows how cruel fang yaun can be take the risk of angering him for a petty inheritence, he is in the clan head faction it is not like he is in a rush to leave he has the timetable to everything that is going to happen and  it seems   he could have been rank 3 by working hard and using the clan resources then leave by faking his death or something  just before everything goes apeshit, he could literally just buy a relic gu in the in the caravan and the problem is solved. it is utterly ridiculous imo to take that kind of risk for a mortal inheritence it's not like it is an immortal one.Also the ren zu legends ending is utter non sense (no offense) if it was that clear, thieving heaven verenerable would have guessed it too and there would have been records of him collecting the 10 perfect physics when we know that the 10 perfect physics are used to create the rank 9 phoetus gu not some bullshit portal to earth.As they say mc can never be smarter than the author.

This novel is published through EMP and I couldn't tag more than one category. Other tags included Action, Adventure, Vampire, Romance, Angel, Demon, and a little bit of Comedy. This is a long novel that I have been writing by putting all my heart and brain into it. However, I know it is not perfect and hopes it will be good enough to keep your interest. One thing I can promise you, there will be no filler chapters! All chapters were part of the main story.

Real Score: 2/5 (Webnovel you need to fix your scoring system!)Title: "Standard(not), But A Nice Read."It starts off standard as an isekai into a shoujo romance dating sim prequel like "my next life as a villainess" but with more tradgety. Then it goes off that to some kind of power fantasy where they can make and do just about anything. Then the power fantasy is pulled in by the plot of the isekai worlds story. And it just goes back and forth until the story trips out at the end.In conclusion, it's ok.

i like the concept of the novel. but the saintess is just cringing me out. Look she is a genius, have her pride but clearly she is not suppose to be a stupid second generation kind. Now she is an immortal and she tranmagate into a body of a weakling in a very unfamiliar world AND THIS GENIUS SAINTESS just because she is hungry, and have too much pride the first idea that pop up in her genius brain is  stealing......NOT IN A CONVERT WHY, SHE JUST STEAL FOOD IN A BROAD DAY LIGHT IN MIDDLE OF THE CROWD....now you're telling me that she become an immortal without any cautious what so over??!! you arrive in the middle of nowhere without your power and you just blantantly stealing without hiding your track?? and withour any information whatsover about the world??!! and you dont what too world because you think its beneath you so you choose to steal instead??!!! FUCKING LOGIC......IT JUST DOESNT MAKE ANY SENSE