After all the work I did create this skill, of course, I would like to activate it. The system accepted my thoughts my agreement and a new tab appeared on the left-hand side of my vision. I mentally clicked on it.
right away I will say this story has decent world-building and ok story development. but that's it. first of all, reading the first 15 or so chapters is like rubbing sandpaper on your eyes and is the visual equivalent of nails on a chalkboard. excruciatingly slow start, repeating segments that don't add anything, and a general lack of plot development outside of typical world building combines with machine translation quality English to create a unique abomination. to top it off it's maddening that a story can have such decent world-building while making a character so empty I question if the story even needs them. I will attempt to read the remaining chapters while it's free, but genuinely don't think I can. this novel isn't the worst thing ( that goes to a novel that suddenly became one-piece fanfic at chapter 85ish) but I cannot stress enough how mediocre at best this is.
woah! this story was amazing, I'm engrossed in reading it, Freyah is a strong character, I'm excited to find out more about what future they will have as the story goes on 😍✨
I read all your books, a few chapters exactly. All of your books are slices of Life with a hint of drama (which doesn't have a vibe for me anyway) and actually, that kind of genre is not my cup of tea, to be honest. I'm waiting for something that will make me excited for reading them but there is nothing tho. But a few days ago I found this book and read a few chapters and found it a bit interesting in the beginning, so I kept reading it a few more, but over time I got bored so I stopped.Apart from the fact that the plot and conflict are the same as other common romances (that have stupid MC blah blah blah), your book is slow-burn too, so I'm tired of reading it.But I'll wait for your book with another genre btw!
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