What an Amazing piece of Art. With your story I fell deeply in love with Webnovel. Thanks and more power to your elbow author. Hope you will continue to provide us with more Amazing story I the future
Note to author:I haven't read this yet but there are a ton of negative reviews. Aye bro. Don't give up writing. It's like when we were little and used to try to tell grown ups our stories and things. At first we couldn't convey our messages clearly because we were too young. With more time and experience we learned how to express ourselves better. But even when we got a little older and learned how to say things more coherently our stories sometimes turned out to not be as grand as we thought them to be. Maybe this is like that.Don't give up.
Im not great with reviews but this story is great so far. Similarly to the ofher reviewers, I believe this story has a lot of potential. Though the chapters could be released a but more often, each chapter is great to read. Sorry if that didn’t make much sense 😂 This story is amazing!
Oops, almost forgot the tradition of Webnovel, my bad. Here's what I have been planning when I began writing this book.Writing style: Well, I am trying my best to present the story in simple English while also providing decent immersion.Characters: This is one part of the story I can say with my chest puffed up, they are realistic. Most of my efforts went into designing characters that are life-like.World Background: This is set on Earth involving its numerous complexities. I assure you that any magical phenomenon set in the story will have a solid logic. Grammar: Well, my language is almost perfect. Though it may not be on the level of standard publications since I barely spend about an hour of editing per chapter.Updates: Well, this is something for the future. I am currently uploading 3 chapters per day, but don't know how long I could keep this up. Maybe if I go full-time writing, this would be easy. Let's leave it for the future.Conclusion: Have a read and see for yourself. I haven't used any cliche till now, so hehe. Expect a good reading time
it's really a unique kind of stories not very scary but is really thrilling and mind twisting at the end. i love how every chapter so far has a bad ending to it.
Honestly, I prefer this version where they give the protagonist a name more consistent with their selection and not the RAW where for some strange reason the author tries to force the Chinese thing by giving the MC a name that has nothing to do That's why I hate these Chinese novels where our world is involved, that stupid nationalism is annoying
It's not bad I like it I think it's a good read for your tastes and have a lot of free chapters like a fair amount to think if you like the book and add it or not so there's my downgraded review.
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