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Translation Quality - Decent from what I can tell from first impressions.Stability of Updates - Not sure yet, will wait until it is picked.Story Development - It feels like the author has taken a lot of inspiration from Pokemon, but set the story in a real world setting. From my initial read it feels like the story is well paced, by which it takes months rather than days for the MC to become powerful (But he still isn't the best even with the system).Character Design - The characters are quite refreshing when compared to some of the cliches that appear on this website. However, this story can feel like a Pokemon fan-fiction at some points. For example, the author uses different names but similar descriptions for the various Sprites, which can come across as weird and overly-long to read at times.World Background - From what I can tell it has a slice of life feel to it and the various places visited are appropriately described. The main setting so far involves school and the city, with the various other countries and organisations that are explained early on.  Overall, a decent read but it would feel easier to read if the Sprite names were shortened to something more manageable (Just a personal Preference).

No one I say no oneNot even Gods will disagreeNot even Mad Snail will Disagreeby what I am going to sayMad Snail, your pet name suits you depending on the pace you have while releasing chapters . You took the name by seeing the future or changed your name to mock readers & yourself by changing the pace. Well Snail is the most suited name based on the pace while Mad represents the Overall impact the Novel, Manga & Ani.. Sorry except anime; leaves on the mind of the readers.

Even within the group of sign in novels, this one is lackluster. The system is not explained properly, the MC makes questionable choices, the other characters are a bunch of idiots (including his sister). I suggest you save your time for one of the better stories offered this week.

I believe this is correct and what you deserve.Please make sure to post more often so that you can get a higher rating and also so that more and more people will read and review your story

A good novel, I like it and probably will become one of my favorite books(maybe, who knows?) I dislike the introduction of more women that has signs of intimate relationship with Keiran(maybe just me? not sure if they really do) because I'm getting quite confused of who am I gonna ship to the mc(I like the doctor best for him). because I liked harem a lot in the past(I still like harem) I tend to ship many women to the mc and probably Keiran is gonna end up with just one woman(well, as long as there is romance probably the book is gonna be perfect for me, just for me okay?)Good work author!

The translation is really bad but if you Can read past the translation inconsistencies then maybe you might get hooked on the humor and characters in here.

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love this book very very very much... please update more. Hahaha I am a fan of traps XD TRAPS MUST RULE THE WORLD HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH