The story is great and all but it lacks proper world building. The MC is supposed be intelligent according to the author but MC acts like emotionaly unstable idiot. The flow of the story is a bit lacking and the MC some how kills s level creatures even though he himself is low leveled and what heck is it about an s level taxi driver! And the constant exited yelling of the MC gets on your nerve while reading. The overall Idea and concept of the story is great but presentation is lacking
I am back again to review a second time. World building was amazing. No info dumps, only smooth transitions to show you how the world in built and how everything flows.System elements are not boring, or taking too much from the focus of the story, rather int integrates well with everything.The Mc is calculating and a rational person, yet seems to enjoy the thrill of battle.Overall if you like fantasy, system, expansive and rich lore, this is a novel for you
I love this story! I like how the main character always gets all the beautiful girls and at the same time always delivering tight face slaps. He's one of my new idols!
I tapped on the story by accident, but when I started reading it, I actually found it attractive. the tag says slow paced, but I don't think so at all. there are mini time skips and the progression of the story is stable. you feel like it's going somewhere.world building is not that important because it's basically based on our own world. only difference is that the mc is from a fictional country in the Pacific ocean. if I'm not wrong, it's just below Hawaii or something.others might find it dull, but to me it's relaxing. no action, no romance, but it's heartwarming and you journey with the mc. I'm eating it 4.5 for now. I hope the author don't make it trash.
Dropping translation quality down. Continuously repeated phrases and scenes throughout the story almost word for word. The translator is also super ungrateful. Update stability is also dropping down because of the premium. Chapters have slowed down tremendously in preparation for releasing multiple premium chapters at once, to reduce the amount of free chapters for the week on top of making it premium. Story development is almost non existent, he's always the strongest, and he chases a woman through half the current novel. Character design is a joke, cultivators are introduced as "experts" and women are introduced as "supreme beauties" and sometimes never actually given names. Characters fade into the background frequently, especially if you're friends with the MC. World building again is a joke, somehow even when you're going to different worlds the author managed to keep it dry. Describing the "immortal realms" has "impossibly vast" doesn't actually tell anybody anything. This novel is mediocre at best, possibly worth the read, definitely not worth premium though.
A really great read! Really enjoyed it more than I thought I would. Integreging story and could not stop reading. Had to read it all in one go. Would recommend!!!!
Translation is eloquent, BUT the original author seems to be lazy with the story.... As a D&D player in 3.5e and 5e, I sometimes feel oddities within the writing. I became more interested in read the Ch. 60+ mtl versions until the story's end.The story based on WoW instance dungeon style with D&D 3.5e+Pathfinder+ part 5e class Monk growth, but eventually acts like a diary with mismatched temporal flow (saying if its been a month or some random day in Spring, but only a few days passed) and misplaced D&D system rules..... Even the irregularity with D&D rules or lack of explaining the network system by the original author... makes me feel cringed....The original author of this D&D story seems to become lazy and does not add Status display updates or refer to vital items used by the Monk Yi Qiu such as the Hulk pants material (Ch. 65)...The physical descriptions are hazardously placed... (1) bald (2) below average Chinese citizen male physique in Southern China (3) Necessary monk muscles by Ch. 30+.... (4) Arms' appearance/anatomy...(Ch. 64, 120, 298, 363, 808)? SPOILER!: Eventually the original author gives up the player networking post-Ch. 766 [Yi Qiu Monk Lv20] even as early Ch. 407 and sends him on a random episodic exploration collecting storyline [NO MORE INSTANCES-DUNGEONS!! even rewards became food stuff]...Overall, I can see the translation displays the original author's experience in D&D since 3.5e, but the story lacks realism... How is Yi Qiu's status screen per level up?....!!!!! SIGH........!!!
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