Frozen Reverie

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i love the concept of the story pretty much everything for someone who doesnt really like killing and just want somw world building kind a book. everything is good but the mc, he is kinda weak in character. there are parts that are completely hilarious. but i think you better explain why his farmer is different not just directly ending it as a bug. the storyline is getting boring too, atleast put some detail about what his doing or making. i think that you lack that part, all you want to show in your book how op he was and lazy but the title is about his farmers atleast give us some excitement of making this and that. its really lack something in that part. and the mc? he acts kinda stupid and annoying. atleast give him a personality that is firm. the story is a little weak too. have some terrible situations that makes the people in the story panic about their situation. just giving a beast tide is okay but not actualy saying what happen or their situation is not okay. and directly saying a lot of them dies a single night when you said its only difficult if they get stronger, i get it that its because of a certain system managers that the difficulty went up but it still unreasonable when the mc is not even facing that much. give us a feeling that the difficulty went up, not just a list of a lot of deaths. it made me like its not another news. you lack expressing that part

I just finished reading the 40 chapters, and I have to say it's pretty good. If I have to nitpick It would be about the info dumb. Very recommended, and I hope it gets picked up.

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Really good so far! I’m looking forward to more, good job :)

Wdym 5 chapters Trial Read??Also why is there so much edited MTL in the current novels?? (Class: Full-Time Mage (better than Part-Time i guess?), 'Emperor of Europe (?????).Generic Mc no. 25737183

"Bermain dengan hujan tidak akan menyembuhkan penyakitmu!" Sehun kehilangan kesadarannya. Mendengar itu, Yoona seakan menyadari sesuatu. Gadis itu diam menatap Sehun tak percaya. Sehun menyesali perkataannya. "maksudku, kenapa kau bermain dengan air hujan? Kau bisa terserang flu." ia mencoba untuk terlihat tenang. Tetapi Yoona masih saja diam. Ia jadi bingung harus mengatakan apa.

"You know... Ever since that incident, he never looks after himself... I'm really worried that he will fall one day."