Forever Entwined: A Love Beyond Time

I took a deep breath  

"the next one was  ichigo kurosaki from the world of bleach"

Author here. Thank you everyone who has contributed to this book in one way or another, I am deeply grateful.Can't wait to show you more of what I have in store for you. Let's continue this journey together!Happy reading😘😘😘

I am absolutely OBSESSED with this book. It’s the definitely one of my favorite books on webnovel. Such good detail. Good story outline. Fantastic character development. Characters with heart wrenching back stories. Reminds me of meteor garden, a Netflix cdrama, but honestly better. Going to read more of her work once I’m done with this one.

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I like how the story progresses and how we see that the character actually is trying to do something and find answers and I believe that this novel is quite good and everyone should try it

Your book is worth more than five stars, your choice of words is great and the flow is just wonderful.    I've read all your chapters and can't wait for the next, thumbs the author up, you are a talented writer.

This story has a lot of promise. The details exploring cultivation and the setting and society are really vibrant. There is an attention to details that brings it to life and shows great promise as the story starts to unfold. There is also a joy in the storytelling that comes through expressing just how much fun becoming a cultivator would be.The current posting pace is really high, almost every day we get a new post and some days we get more than one. I do love receiving chapters frequently, but this probably needs to be slowed down to address the following issues:The big downside to this story right now is the grammar and formatting. There needs to be a lot more polish put on this before posting. The inconsistent capitalization in the story title is a good indicator of the kind of issues we have: it jumps between 1st person and 3rd person POVs, goes back and forth between present and past tense, there are extra spaces and punctuation typos. Occasionally a sentence just ends suddenly and is never finished. Or a sentence seems more like a bullet from the story outline, that was supposed to get more framing thoughts, or more transition between the neighboring paragraphs but it never got it, so we are left just interpreting sudden ideas and figuring out what just happened.I do think there is a good story in here though, once some editing puts some polish on it.