Mind you, I’ve only read like the first 16 chapters but I have yet to see or read anything that would or could show me that lu Lu or whatever the MCs name as a great thieve as what the title had us believing . The Mc is just bad written there is no way about it , later on in the story it might get better I don’t know but what I know is that an Ameture author should never write about rebirth cuz that means that our dear Mc needs to be stronger, smarter and way more maturer than anybody else around him , and those aren’t things you can expect from an author writing their first novel .I mean this novel is screaming at you the ameturness of the Mc , like it his first time playing the game , yea yea I know he had I different class at the time but that doenst mean he need to act like a moron or a twelve years old who just got into the game , don’t even get me started on that whole contract thing I get that the author wanted to write a strifft and all, but did it have to be so stupid and leaving the contract blank not telling us any thing about it is shouts crazy to me , plus what kind of moron accepts a contract that unfair .There is a lot more , waaaaay more but billige it or not I don’t won’t to get into the details .
Great story, glad I clicked it, no over board drama and weird guy grinding points from s*x, the system isn't annoying but actually helps him in his daily life. The MC personality is kind, calm, and collective but has his issue here and there, he is not perfect. The girls and other characters are so open-minded and not annoying like other novels.Overall, the story is my cup of tea.(sorry if I have grammar and spelling mistakes, English is my second language)
Not even going to read it since the power of the mc seems like the same thing as from one certain novel. And since I am already reading a novel like this I don’t want to read another one......at least not now...And since I will feel guilty if I just give a review and a bad one at that, without reading, so I read like some chapters and what can I say I was disappointed 😔 my opinion of course, feel free to give it a try.
This is a perfect example of what loss in quality looks like. Not sure if this was edited after MTL but, somehow I pushed through 16 chapters. I can put up with math that doesn't add up. I can look past Chinese nationalism. I can normally even give a story 20 chapters with MTL if the story is good. This is not
I just read up to 2 chapters. It is an interesting story plot of having two people to another world, but the way I see it is reading right now it's in a level where it needs to plan first. I'll keep reading it and will update it after I finish it all
Hello dear readers, After trying my hand on various platforms, this is going to be my first webnovel. The mysterious story, of a dead body, found in a man's bath. Read along, it will keep you on the edges of your seat. Don't forget to vote and review!!😊😊
So far it's been very nice, apart from the little thief part 🤣🤣 I'll keep following it, but please....no MC that takes on human form....since you created a non-human leave him like that please
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