First at Last

this is a very well written story.the charackters are very relateable and unique.the game world is well thoughtout and the various infos we get aren't thrown in your face as walls of texts (most of the time).the story has some strange twists and erratic decisions, but that is how free open world rpgs are, so that is not really a malus either.

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Honestly never knew that I could be so invested in a book before. It is so amazingly structured and I love the way that the author writes! Highly recommended.

Knowing the author; it will pique your interest so I highly recommend this. I also got some spoiler, which really amazed me by the Author's craziness, hahaha.

The main conceit of the novel is that the MC, a reincarnated or transmigrated man, offers analysis and advice to the disguised king of the country without knowing the king’s identity. In the 30 chapters so far, he’s also impressed three of the king’s ministers with his wisdom and ability to reach accurate conclusions given the scarcest of indirect evidence.It is unclear whether he actually has such Holmesian deductive skills, or if he constructs post hoc cover stories for the knowledge he already has of the kingdom’s development. It’s not clear why he has this knowledge of the kingdom’s development either, or how comprehensive in scope and timeline his knowledge is.Then there’s the fact that according to the synopsis he has a system, which we have yet to see. In summary, at this point the novel has been a pleasure to read, but if it continues in the same vein of him giving sagacious analyses to the king and his ministers, it will get stale. However, as indicated above, there’s still  a lot of room for further developments and significant changes to the plot, so it is almost certainly the case that the trial chapters cannot be used to judge the rest of the novel.

Your book title is great, the plot is very strong, the Characters are well-organised, and your writing style is unique. waiting for the next chapters.

Nice story and overall it's a great read. The plot is unique and enjoyable.The characters are well set , but, are bit compounded. However, that's cool as well. KEEP UP THE WORK !!

Because this is the first novel that I made.So I will give a rating of 5. There is no scheduled release time per chapter. maybe 1-2 chapters / day. Or in a few days will not release a chapter.If there is spare time, I will write two chapters/day.* Please correct and give me advice, if you feel something is missing.