Oh my God. I got excited. so many times toward each update of this story. It completely blew my mind. It managed to surpass my high expectations AND be nothing at all like I expected.
does the author have some problem with numbers beyond 100? why always stop updating after 100chs? why bro?i have been checking both novel everyday with the hope that you would upload today
The beginning started rather smoothly and nice but then it's a rush in turning the Mc into an OP Character with lot of holes missing key parts for the storry sadly also nothing new compared to other storrys
Oh My God, this is amazing, it's so realistic and exciting. I need more chapters, finished the 299 chaps in like 2 days, I rlly loved this, my whole attention for 2 full days was devoted to this and I need more!!!
The writing quality is terrible. This could be such a great novel if they author actually knew how to write a story. So many repetitive words, sentences that make no sense, and lacking metaphors. It’s honestly unfortunate because this book could have potential if it was written by someone else. I rate 1.5 stars, literally hurts my brain trying to read this book.
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1 this might just be me being nit picky , but whatever the main character is using is not nen.Nen has restrictions on the user that allows the ability to be more powerful, take for example kuropika; can only use certain chains on the spiders or else he will die. By allowing the mc 100% talent at all types of nen you have practically ignored a key opportunity to define the mc. Because to me as of 10 chapters in the mc has no defining characteristics ,a jack of all trades does not always =god like, in this case it's just means there exist a character who can do what ever he wants withought the needs for justification.If you have read or seen HxH nen qualities is built off a characters personality(which cheredoe lacks) , and I concede to fact that this a hack system novel, however it still has to be logical. 2 This novel feels seriously jumpy, the mc just happens to meet several main characters if atg for seemly no reason withought hardly no space between each chapter. 3 I apologize to the author if this is found offensive, however I simply trying to give a honest and hopefully insightful review that might be of some use.
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