Fated to be the Queen

Absalutely love this fanfic, 10/10  The author is creative and a good writer, The character development is great and i love the Yahiko Toga ship

Sinceramente, una de las mejores novelas que he leído.Pocos errores menores con la escritura, pero se pueden pasar por alto, eso es todo lo que tengo que decir.

I must say, I'm really not a big fan of goody goody MCs. The plots might seem entertaining, sure, but it's just all over the place. One min. the story has elaborate plans then the next it goes like "no I'm not going to betray them their still my family" or "no I can't hurt them, they're like family to me" or "don't be mad at them even if they're a manipulative and psychopathic family". I mean seriously this is a cultivation novel, there is no place for goodness and naivety here. And lastly, why is it offline Cultivation? I can't seem to understand at what part of the story is it detailed to be offline cultivation.

Cant finish this bs, no original work, too much filler and info dump, and there is no logic in this story, all of this just after getting to the 9th chapter, just imagine what the rest could be...

Progress is going well, keep it up! ^^--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

I've waited for quite awhile to get the complete understanding that at least i need to judge the quality of the story here and for sure I'm fascinated.The author is obviously with passion, it's like he's trying to get you completely immersed in the world he has created which is large and full of a great potential for anyone reading this now and still deciding on whether to read the novel or not.The character design is literally built from the beginning and by the time we will see how much the protagonists are going to change ( for me I'm excited to know more about Irene and how she will change while being with jaxith)The fights are different and great, the fight sequences precisely are arranged in a scaling manner making it better over the time, not the regular one sided fights that the protagonist win at the end by a quick trick or discovering a hidden ability (became so cliché by the way), in here the author focused on fusing the knowledge of jaxith with his surroundings and ability to create a balanced fights that's at the end he just knows what's the right thing to do (the onohly was a perfect example on that but I won't spoil a word😅)Overall, the characters are perfect and by the time we'll see much more as the author said before as he's focusing on jaxith and Irene relation building, the continent is large with 6 kingdoms, right now we're still in the first kingdom and literally there's a lot of content, the author knows what he's doing it's like I'm witnessing a hidden talent that just needs a push, he takes his time between the chapters to consider his plot well and that's something I really respect, quality not quantity although I want him to write more but at least he's stable, balancing between his job and writing isn't easy, but clearly he's talented, by the way, didn't you get a chance to get a contract, I think that you've much of a content now, although I think it won't be suitable with your timeline.Anyway keep it up darkash, I'm really fascinated by this novel, it's an adventure that I've not seen like in the webnovel and of course it reminds me with some of the most successful novels that I've read.

Why do I feel like the penguin’s are going too fail??

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