Naruto walked up to Thor, putting his hand on the Thunder God's shoulder, "Well, I don't know about Thor, but I plan on ripping out Tony's facial hair. One follicle for every snarky remark he was to say when I ask him what the fuck he was thinking."
Firstly I'd Say this is A really interesting dark fantasy novel about transmission. Secondly, The narrative is simple and that makes it a stand out. And lastly Keep up the good work.
The overall pace of the novel is good, and in my personal opinion it is not cringe but I feel the MC needs to be smart, he needs to train and increase his stats, but he just gains more and more skills, and to the author I would suggest showing the status screen little more so the readers can keep up with the progress
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